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Haiku

Lemon, raspberry, mint

Ha! Mine's cherry and sweeter

Mine's, by far the best 


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 the first line in your

Submitted by jm10 on Fri, 2009-03-27 08:40.

 the first line in your haiku is 6 sylables not 5 like itsays to have.

make sure you fix that. thanks.

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